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415 clicks; posted to FarkUs » on 14 Jun 2014 at 7:53 PM (27 weeks ago)   |  Favorite    |   share:  Share on Twitter share via Email Share on Facebook   more»



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2014-06-14 11:01:53 PM  
1 votes:
Lose the phone.
And the hat.
Slow it down.
Other than that, not bad for your 1st time out.
2014-06-14 10:19:53 PM  
1 votes:
I thought it was decent.

I think you could add some jokes playing off the fact that you're a welder (isn't that what you said?). Welders are farked up people, with all those chemicals flying around. If you live in an area of Canada where people work for a living, this might be a way to connect with the audience.

Also, you sound exactly like Seth Rogen. Maybe incorporate a Seth Rogen impression into the bit.

But I am not a comedian, nor am I funny. I do, however, wish you the best of luck..
2014-06-14 08:43:14 PM  
1 votes:
Yeah, connect with the audience and lose the AIDS bit.
2014-06-14 05:44:33 PM  
1 votes:
It got better when you put the phone down and connected with the audience. Keep it up!
 
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