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(Some Dahlia)   Farkette finished her book. Check out the website. You can pre-order now or buy it on December 22nd on Amazon...assuming the world doesn't end on December 21st   (theshulimcycle.com) divider line 10
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2012-11-22 01:33:32 PM
Someone has decided to start murdering teenage girls at Eduli Springs High School

Someone has decided to start murdering teenage girls at Eduli Springs High School

SOMEONE HAS DECIDED TO START MURDERING TEENAGE GIRLS AT EDULI SPRINGS HIGH SCHOOL!!!!



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2012-11-22 01:34:24 PM
Kidding. Good luck with the book sales chickie. Not really my kind of thing though.
 
2012-11-22 03:19:18 PM
Thank you. :)
 
2012-11-22 04:14:42 PM
Good for you! What are you going to read next?

/I keed
 
2012-11-22 05:51:12 PM
It's as good as Twilight
 
2012-11-22 06:07:44 PM
best of luck with your book.
 
2012-11-22 11:01:15 PM

The All-Powerful Atheismo: It's as good as Twilight


Harsh!
 
2012-11-23 12:46:17 AM
 
2012-11-23 05:33:07 AM
shamanwest
The All-Powerful Atheismo:
It's as good as Twilight

Harsh!



Well, that sample excerpt is a bit over 300 words long and there are already two things sparkling and the rest is all about her, her, her (*):

Marilyn stood in the light of the windows around her. The sunlight danced lightly along the white dress with its long train laid out carefully along the floor behind her. Her hair was pulled back into a white lace veil that she had pulled back off of her face. Underneath the veil the jeweled tiara sparkled in the sunlight.

Sounds rather twilight-y, except that her-her-her has also taken over the sparkling.

And there's even an obvious editing error:
"Devon broke pulled away"


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(*) In fact, the only word used more often than "her" (17 times) is "the" (22).
 
2012-11-23 05:54:08 AM

Glenford: Good for you! What are you going to read next?

/I keed


two blondes that refused to solve the 20-piece puzzle because it said 2-4 years?

/i think i told it wrong, i forget
 
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