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(Amazon)   I have finally succeeded in getting a collection of short stories together in book form. I've never tried this before so I hope you may find these to be both interesting and to your liking   ( divider line
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2012-10-19 06:35:31 PM  
It's very descriptive but you need to lose about half of the commas. It's just a suggestion. (You certainly have accomplished more than I ever have as far as writing goes even though I have been doing it for ages).

Good luck!

2012-10-20 12:01:46 PM  
Thanks. Any helpful suggestions are great appreciated. To be honest, I didn't notice that. I was nervous about doing that on Kindle and I probably didn't edit as well as I should have. Thanks again.
2012-10-20 12:33:22 PM  
I would suggest adding a description of the stories. If they're not all similar or related, then pick three that you feel are representative of your overall style or approach, and include a one-sentence description of each. Don't pick the three 'best' ones, but ones that you think really show how you think and feel as a writer.
2012-10-21 01:06:00 PM  
I'm beginning to think I should have run this by you guys here first. I'm getting some really good reminders of what I didn't do the first Thanks.
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